Hello I already wanted to thank you for creating this masterpiece especially since there are several languages and I don't understand most of them apart from French thank you and I also wanted to put a comment especially at the VN level how can I say it, it's incredible already the characters the environment the scenes the dialogues everything even if there are still small translation errors but I find that the story makes us want to see a sequel I'm honestly impressed I I can't wait to see a sequel
I had a quick question about the main character, what important role he would play because in terms of power, he's a normal person. I'm a little confused, you could say.
Hey there! Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words!
I'm really happy that I was able to impress you. It's my first project so I still have a lot to improve but your words really encourage me. As for the translation errors, unfortunately I don't have much I can do... I only have command of English and PTBR, and I can't send someone to do revisions, but I'll do my best to improve.
Regarding your question about the protagonist, I confess that I didn't plan a world-changing role for him. I planned to use him just to introduce this world, the other characters and this big story I want to tell. But I'm definitely going to develop the character more.
Once again, thank you so much for the feedback, you made my day brighter! (◠‿・)—☆
Hello, thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad you like this feature. I've had my periods of not knowing English and really wanting to read a vn so I thought it would be good to put this in place for those who need it (´・ω・)っ由
Even better with a new partner! Yet still the same adorable Ford! So exciting!!
The rhythm of the story did feel more comfortable and easy to comprehend, though it's a pity seeing the reviving part was less detailed, maybe it's for the story balance I guess?
You guys did a great work, hope this time you could tell us more about this intriguing story and really enjoy the creating process
Thank you so much for your kind words! It’s wonderful to hear that you found the rhythm of the story more comfortable and easy to follow.
We appreciate your feedback about the reviving part. The plan is to give more details later in the story, even more than in the previous version ;-)
I'm passionate about this story and can’t wait to share more with you. Stay tuned for more intriguing twists and turns, and thank you for your continued support (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
Another artist coming out of the shadows it's really nice to have other artists with their own style in any case I can't wait to see what happens next there was just one question do you work alone?
Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yes, I'm the one writing and programming and generating the backgrounds. The other assets, such as music and some sound effects, are from sites like Uppbeat and Pixabay. And the sprites and CGs are created by my friend and very talented artist Glitch ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
I really liked this VN, honestly a really nice, cool story and a lot of mystery I'm still going to add something the version where the French language had some small translation problems there were sometimes English or Ukrainian or even Spanish languages that appeared but there was nothing disturbing honestly I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Hello I already wanted to thank you for creating this masterpiece especially since there are several languages and I don't understand most of them apart from French thank you and I also wanted to put a comment especially at the VN level how can I say it, it's incredible already the characters the environment the scenes the dialogues everything even if there are still small translation errors but I find that the story makes us want to see a sequel I'm honestly impressed I I can't wait to see a sequel
I had a quick question about the main character, what important role he would play because in terms of power, he's a normal person. I'm a little confused, you could say.
Hey there! Thank you so much for your feedback and kind words!
I'm really happy that I was able to impress you. It's my first project so I still have a lot to improve but your words really encourage me. As for the translation errors, unfortunately I don't have much I can do... I only have command of English and PTBR, and I can't send someone to do revisions, but I'll do my best to improve.
Regarding your question about the protagonist, I confess that I didn't plan a world-changing role for him. I planned to use him just to introduce this world, the other characters and this big story I want to tell. But I'm definitely going to develop the character more.
Once again, thank you so much for the feedback, you made my day brighter! (◠‿・)—☆
Well listen, I'm happy to have brightened your day ^^
It doesn't matter, I guess the main character would be the wolf?
That's right, but with the whole issue of him having amnesia, I couldn't make him the center in a way that made me happy... 乁| T 〰 T |ㄏ
I see I see
It's the first time I've seen a vn with so many different languages!!LOVE IT
Hello, thank you very much for your feedback! I'm glad you like this feature. I've had my periods of not knowing English and really wanting to read a vn so I thought it would be good to put this in place for those who need it (´・ω・)っ由
Yellow Chocobo! I'm so happy you're back!
Even better with a new partner! Yet still the same adorable Ford! So exciting!!
The rhythm of the story did feel more comfortable and easy to comprehend, though it's a pity seeing the reviving part was less detailed, maybe it's for the story balance I guess?
You guys did a great work, hope this time you could tell us more about this intriguing story and really enjoy the creating process
Thank you so much for your kind words! It’s wonderful to hear that you found the rhythm of the story more comfortable and easy to follow.
We appreciate your feedback about the reviving part. The plan is to give more details later in the story, even more than in the previous version ;-)
I'm passionate about this story and can’t wait to share more with you. Stay tuned for more intriguing twists and turns, and thank you for your continued support (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡
You give credit for the imagery and sound, but was any of the text generated with or modified by AI other than for translation?
Hey, thanks for the feedback. And no, all of the visual novel writing came straight from an abyss I call my mind ( ╹▽╹ )
Another artist coming out of the shadows it's really nice to have other artists with their own style in any case I can't wait to see what happens next there was just one question do you work alone?
Hey, thanks for the feedback. Yes, I'm the one writing and programming and generating the backgrounds. The other assets, such as music and some sound effects, are from sites like Uppbeat and Pixabay. And the sprites and CGs are created by my friend and very talented artist Glitch ( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Talented yes I confirm and agree I see in all cases you are a perfect duo👌
Thanks a lot dear (｡◕‿‿◕｡)
I really liked this VN, honestly a really nice, cool story and a lot of mystery I'm still going to add something the version where the French language had some small translation problems there were sometimes English or Ukrainian or even Spanish languages that appeared but there was nothing disturbing honestly I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Oh, I'll take a look at the problem. Thank you very much for the feedback and your kind words (◍•ᴗ•◍)
I like how much fun is had with the text and sprites
thank you so much (◕ᴗ◕✿)